I've really enjoyed this so far....will you be continuing this Story? X
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Wonderfully written, I am looking forward
how goes it further.
Greetings Drachenkind
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
I have finished it since posting this so long ago.
I really appreciate that. I think I'll post up to chapter 22 next. Any criticism you would like to give?
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
That was really good. In fact that was great .You did a wonderful job. If you keep writting i'll keep reading.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Hey I've been reading and it's really cool... I like your concept, I've never thought about the "downside" of being immortal. My complaint is that I don't like your font- kind of hard to read! I will keep reading...
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Hey,
Thanks for the comment. I will definitely change the font as soon as I send this.
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I have updated the book up to the first ten chapters. Let me know what you think.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
It has alot of discription and meaning only in the first parts of my reading.The man in this story has clearly lost something very close to him and now has just given up on life compleatly. I cant wait to read the rest!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Hello there. It's been a really long time since I've been on here. I have finished the book.