BookRix

I appreciate the comments

was really good

Toithomas. Thank you for taking the time to read this book. I do agree with you. It was a quick rough draft. I definately do need to improve ... I knew when I posted it definately wasn't my best (I was typing in a fury yesterday.... and I knew I had left out a lot...) I asked you to read this mostly for exactly your honesty. BookRix too me is just that! Thank you and YES this book will have another draft and improvements

This is a very moving and spiritual story. To some it will test the limits of their beliefs, but I don’t think it will offend anyone; many may read this and come away with a sense of wonder and inspiration. This is what I call a “What if” kind of story. It’s best to just let your mind be free and open to the possibilities and forget what you believe. Get up caught up in the idea and this story can carry you away.

As lovely as this story is, it does need a lot of work. Yes, there are grammatical and spelling issues, but there’s more than just that. There is very little description in this tale, which I think forces the reader to use too much of their imagination just to understand some of what is going on. There should be a little more clarity provided in the telling of each phase of the story.

For me personally, I have questions that haven’t been answered by the end of the story. Will there be more added later?

Overall, I love the story, but the read was a little rough. Despite that, this was totally worth my time. I’m glad I read this and look forward to seeing it developed more.

sorry for misspells!!!!!