BookRix

Failure is the result of man's pride. Success is yielding our lives to our Lord Jesus Christ.

I had a pleasant time reading this well written work

I really liked it. There were a few grammatical errors, but other then that I really enjoyed it. Are you going to add more or leave it as it is?(:

Review: At last you have found your element. Yes! Keep this up Terrex. Write your feelings. Put it into free verse. You can even do little poems about your super heroes. Keep writing, keep trying and keep learning. You got it. Proud of you for continuing to try. Great job. Robynn

I love this poem ^_^

short poem.

i like the lesson from it, well the lesson i get from it is that don't give up and you will succeed. I'm i right?
anyways for a first poem nice^_^