Just a Life.

Can things ever get better? Von:
User: Smart_Ass
Just a Life.

Vivian Cross has suffered a life of betrayal. When she was five, her mother passed away leaving her with her father. All throught Middle School, she was made fun of for being smart and pretty...and she had to leave the school year finding out her boyfriend cheated on her with her bestfriend.

 

When Vivi and her father move to San Fransico, California, they move for a new beginning, a better life. When Vivi starts her new school, Norwalk High School, she begins making new friends, and suddenly, everything slowly begins to get better.

 

Evan Daniels. The school player and the hottest guy in school. He is determined to persue Vivi after he runs into her. After he gets a taste of her lips, he cant stay away. And if he falls for her, it may damage his reputation. Will he pick Vivi, or his popular image.

 

Nick Daniels. A outcast in school. Ever since he was little, he felt like nobody ever understood him. And being the brother of the most popular guy in school, wasnt the best thing ever. When he runs into Vivi at a after-school club, he immediantly falls for her. She is so kind to him, and he found someone that understands him. 

 

Will he be able to steal Vivian's heart, or will his brother beat him to it...?

 


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Gelöschter User

more pls i would love to read more

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J. M. Rivers

I want to read more. I hope you use the beginning to explain a few things in the plot development, in short I hope the beginning will fit in somewhere in the story. I hope not to find cliches coz this looks really promising.

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Gelöschter User

Ooh, it was suspenseful. I like how you painted the scene dark in the beginning. Always a great way to capture the reader's attention. Can't wait for you to update! :D

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Smart_Ass

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*does happy dance*

thanks sooo much!

it means a lot!

Gelöschter User

No Problem! Always happy to support!

Smart_Ass

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