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i like this book it is cute and kinda romantic :)

It was so cute.
But I didn't understand somethings but overall it was good.
At first when I saw the cursing I was like...'Whoa' because we don't curse much but thats just me. Cute though please continue!

well readers am back and i took few vacations and am backing on the book i will be continuing it C:

I enjoyed the concept of this book and can see what you were trying to show, it was very good!
However I thought that:
a. You need to work on the punctuation and spellings, for example in the paragraphs there are no commas or full stops, and no one can say that much with out taking a break :D (I recommend you get a friend to proof read/edit it for you as you sometimes can't see the mistakes in your own work but can in others)

b. Maybe you could of not added so much to two chapters, as it moved a bit too fast. You could of spent more time explaining some of the details; for example when she first moves to the school; that could of been one chapter, just explaining a little bit more about why and how she was feeling and about how she will miss the people she left behind etc.

Overall it is a nice, very relate-able concept to many teenagers, and I really enjoyed it so far! I am looking forward to the next chapter :)

I liked this book and would like to read more.