BookRix

I enjoyed this storyline. I want to know more about Malcolm and Nicole. Is this going to be the end or will there be a continuation? Keep up the good work.

this is a good book thats to bad it was so short you should make a longer book
gud luck

i can't wait for part 2 keep writing baby girl i love it ;)

Girlfriend, it sounds like you love him more than yourself. You can't really love anyone else unless you love yourself. It is not cool to accept abuse. You might want to talk to a professional about that.
Best of luck.

I LIKE THIS ALIL SHORT BUT I LIKE IT AND DREAMER 69 ROCHELLE59 IT HER STORY NOT YOURS SHE TELLING HER STORY NOT TO CONVIENCE ANYONE TO STAY SHE JUST TALKING FOR THE WOMEN THAT CANT AND I NEVER READ ANYWHERE THAT THIS BOOK SAID THAT IT WAS EROTIC THE LANGAUGE IS ALIL STRONG FOR CHILDREN SO IM GUESS THATS WHY ITS XRATED XRATED DOES NOT ALL WAYS MEAN FUCKING AND SUCKING SO GET YOUR MIND OUT THE GUTTER NOW IF YOU WANT A BOOK ABOUT A GOOD FUCK WHICH IT SEEMS LIKE YOUR LOOK FOR FIND IT DONT KNOCK SOMEONE ELSE DO YOUR THING SISTER IF YOU HAVE NOTHING NICE TO SAY DONT SAY SHIT YEAH I SAID SHIT AND I DONT CARE CAUSE I GOT A NASTY MOUTH LOL TODDLES

More please!!!!!!!!

I am also aware that this book is ineligible... because book rix let me know, this is my first time doing this so please understand it is not perfect nor is it award winning but it is mine and i enjoyed writing it. that is all that matters, if you have any writer comments please do so.

Okay this book is not fictional is based on a true story and a true story is just that "true" including the language that was used. Again, this book is not for those easily swayed by a cursing word or a whole paragraph full of them. So please dont be so judgemental when you obviously do not have the complete reason as to why the book was so verbally abusive. This is for women who have experienced this in their lives and how the foul language used makes them realize, one, wow look at where i came from or two, wow is this the situation i am in now. But again as i repeat thank you for the comment it is duly noted.

Well the reason it was placed under erotic, because of some of the language involved but as you can tell the book is not finished and furthermore, this book is not telling anyone to stay in a situation as such, but merely giving you the insite into a person's life as they jouryned to themselves. if you give the book time to be finished I am sure your negative attitude would be turned the other way. But i do appreciate your response and i will try my best not to discourage your taste because obviously it has been tainted. So dreamer69 feel free to not read my books anymore or anything else I publish, so that your vial comments are so sideways because of your depiction. Nevertheless Thank You!

and nobody should write something like this. what are you trying to do, convince somebody else to be that so self absorbed that they keep their kids in situations like that? just crazy.