Amen sister. Our Lord speaks the Truth. A well written story with lots of descriptive language that captured the emotions.
James
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You paint a very clear picture as if watching a movie instead of just reading. You hold your breath waiting for the rock to fly only to exhale in relief when it doesn't. Very enjoyable read.
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Your descriptions and vocabulary seem so prefect a way to contrast the boy's wielding of ignorance and anger, that I was just a bit put off by the quote.
In many eyes, such a quote (which is a wonderful one) replaces the rationality you've displayed.
Your character's disposition toward aggression is the key here. And, whether attributed to an Eastern philosophy or Western religion, it is wisdom gained through long contemplation... mehr anzeigen
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I can see we have another brilliant transplant from Author Stand! Welcome to Bookrix - and thank you for this divine, offering. A short vignette - not much action per se, but definitely a deeply described, in-depth and brilliant portrayal of a small section of time between two people.
Every detail was perfect, setting the stage for the "confrontation" that never occurred. I am deeply impressed with your vocabulary,... mehr anzeigen
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Thanks for the kind words! So glad you enjoyed it!