PROVERBIAL WISDOM

Von:
PROVERBIAL WISDOM

Weary and lost, a woman travels an obscure country road. She approaches an old farmhouse, expecting to get driving directions. Instead, she’s met by an angry boy, looking for a fight! A confrontation ensues. She sees beneath his hostility; but, her power to neutralize her attacker comes as a surprise! It leaves one to ponder an age-worn mystery. Coincidence or Divine Intervention? You be the judge!


Beiträge und Kommentare
Wichtiger Beitrag
Gelöschter User

Amen sister. Our Lord speaks the Truth. A well written story with lots of descriptive language that captured the emotions.

James

2 Kommentare
susan.ruth.wilhelm

Thanks for the kind words! So glad you enjoyed it!

Dieser Kommentar wurde gelöscht.
Wichtiger Beitrag
wells12

You paint a very clear picture as if watching a movie instead of just reading. You hold your breath waiting for the rock to fly only to exhale in relief when it doesn't. Very enjoyable read.

Wichtiger Beitrag
barrycarver

Your descriptions and vocabulary seem so prefect a way to contrast the boy's wielding of ignorance and anger, that I was just a bit put off by the quote.

In many eyes, such a quote (which is a wonderful one) replaces the rationality you've displayed.

Your character's disposition toward aggression is the key here. And, whether attributed to an Eastern philosophy or Western religion, it is wisdom gained through long contemplation... mehr anzeigen

Wichtiger Beitrag
gooduklady

I can see we have another brilliant transplant from Author Stand! Welcome to Bookrix - and thank you for this divine, offering. A short vignette - not much action per se, but definitely a deeply described, in-depth and brilliant portrayal of a small section of time between two people.

Every detail was perfect, setting the stage for the "confrontation" that never occurred. I am deeply impressed with your vocabulary,... mehr anzeigen

Um eine optimale Funktionsweise zu gewährleisten, verwendet unsere Website Cookies. Durch die Nutzung der Website stimmst Du der Verwendung von Cookies zu. Mehr Infos
OK
Top of page
Kein Miniaturbild Entfernen Bitte wähle einen Grund aus Bitte gib die Stelle im Buch an. de de_DE