Atmospheric little story. I could feel the cold and see the ccrstmas tree and the roaring fire. Should you have put "looked in" the window, rather than "looked out" on the first page? Isn't he outside looking in? otherwise very enjoyable.
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The story is short but full of meaning. It conveys the message about the trust of a woman to God. It shows the Village that will be led by a new pastor.
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