This was awesome !!! Actually people don't care about the people who care them the most !!!!
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You just need to improve the grammar and tense. Otherwise I liked the story. My fav part is the joke about customer care. I laughed so hard...
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Yes, I would and I will try my best :) .
Thank you so much for your valuable comments my dear.
You are very welcome.
The story is very sweet and well-told. I had a bit of a problem at first with the name Vikki, since in America it's a girl's name. I had to surmise the main character was male from the context, and then I went and looked at your profile picture and the mystery was cleared up, lol.
Your command of English is amazing, as is your ability to speak so many languages. But there are, of course, grammar issues, which a quick, simple... mehr anzeigen
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So lovely.
I am very happy to hear you. I will try to improve :)
Thanks for the valuable suggestions and lovely comment :)
Nice!
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Thank you Nisha :) and thank you so much for adding my book 'One Beautiful Year' to your favorites :)
:)