BookRix

This was a total piece of shit

Vulgar and poorly written.

This is nothing but a feeble attempt to write out a pornographic rape scene.

Erotica is NOT pornographic prose.

Erotica is, at its core, an intense story of romance.

And yes, while there are often harsh, even violent scenes within erotics stories - there is more to the story than just 'rape'.

Events such as that move a story forward they are intended to make the reader feel angry and wanting vengence all while tapping into the dark, base concept of showing power over the defenseless.

But this hodge-podge of letters thrown onto the page is nothing more than a sick fantasy.

A few suggestions:
1. Learn how to spell or use spell check.
2. Learn how to tell a story using your brain and not your penis.

If I could report your work as being 'pornographic' I would (as it is an option for reporting books)

However, as you've put it in the 18+ category... I cannot.

It is a blow to the erotica community and all the writers who take the genre seriously to have someone come along with a story like this.

Incidentally the ONLY reason I read it is because someone favorited one of my novels - and I decided to see what other books the reader had favorited.

That's what writers who care do. They keep an eye on their community whether it is erotica or short stories or fantasy or whatever... as a way to keep in touch with what their fans like.

forcible sex is not pleasurable it is about the power you have over the victim. I felt that the female in that book was helpless and not turned on at all, but the male was because he took away her choice. If your into that sort of thing then that's all you, because it is something you like to do. I suggest that you and your significant other try it before you write another chapter and then you'll know what your writing about.

Baby if you think forced sex is erotic, then you need help, that was just nasty.
I hate to think about the world you live in.

wow.....

IF YOU LIKE RAPE STORIES THEN I GUESS WHATEVER FLOATS YOUR BOAT.

my pussy is et now