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I am SO sorry about that! I dont know what got into me!!! I just wasn't myself.
It was not my place to judge your book so harshly. I am truly sorry for my rudness.You do have some errors. I belive you can improve on them. Just add more detail and correct spelling and it will be a great book.

Sorry. :(

Oh.My.Gosh. Sorry, but that was a HORRIBLE series. Here are your flaws,

You copied of of the twillight series

You made no sense in the story

Your spelling and grammer is horrible.

You could have put all your books into one.

You needed more details

And I have a question. What is Luke? Is he a vampire or a human? What is he?

I'm sorry, but for your age, you could have done SO much better, and this is coming from a 14 year old!!!!!!

You need to improve. ALOT. But I think you can do it,espesially at your age.

Grate story and it makes it so cool. I wont to read more already :)