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I think you should weits about the sex
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I think this is a very nice book. However you need to change your and signs (&) to real words and add some dialog and more action into it. But over all I really like this book and hope you add more soon. If you would like some help for these things check out my book 'Kidnapped'. I think you would enjoy it. :)
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Also, you need to use better grammar.
stuti khanna
thanks i will be surely do this
Sorry i mean write
Surely I will write more in my next book