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This story sounds interesting, however, a lot of your punctuation is off. And unfortunately, this makes it hard to read your work. If you read your work aloud you will be able to find most mistakes and fix them immediately.
I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Good luck :)
Great job!
Keep writing!
---RbG
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A refreshing different story
you can't stop there
I want to find out what will happen
give me more soon
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