BookRix

cool. i realy liked the ending

Again, extremely well-written - and deserving of another vote!

You have my vote.
Chris

I didn't like Michael, but Tom:)
Nice, satisfying ending, and so well written, Stacey. My vote:)

Good luck
Wendyxx

Meli, has summed up everything I want to say about this story. Well written.
Chris

Love the ending. I liked both entries to tell you the truth, but this one had the ending that could swoon me any day. It is a must read and I will recommend it. It was funny, dramatic and charming all at the same time.

Blessings,
Meli

I agree totally with Sereni, Stacey. Really smooth.

You're story is very well written and truly an easy read. Serena

thank you for the kind words. I enjoyed writing this one, but had trouble keeping it under 1000 words for the contest.