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Nice little dark ending there and a very well written and edited story. I enjoyed it a lot.
I'm a fan of a great twist, and although i kinda saw the trap, i didn't see the very end till... the very end.
Well done and have a vote.
Kade.
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I liked your story the first time I read it,and you have added to and improved it.You have my vote. Serena
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That was absolutely fantastic. I started feeling real sympathy for George and his family, the ending caught me off guard, and it was very well written. You have my vote!!
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I hoped that I could throw you off track. But please, don't stop spraying...they are disgusting!
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Oh God, that was terrible. Not your writing....the ending. I kind of suspected something like that, but the way you wrote, threw me right off track. Such a sad story and one I will never forget. And I will never spray my house either. Poor little friskers. Well done!!
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I didn't expect that ending at all. I thought your story very well written.Serena
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