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Thank you. I hope I can keep getting comments on my poem. I <3 people who <3 my poems

This was painful to read. But even the most painful poetry, if it reaches deep enough, is worth reading more than once, and so I did.
Your words drew this reader in to an experience; a state of mind, whether it still lingers or not.
Anti-love poetry at its best.
I was terribly saddened by the last few lines.
Moving.