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Great story,, still trying to understand why they only stay for few days. It's so expensive to travel to Korea and back. It seem like they were hiding something.

I really enjoyed reading your story about a boy visiting his grandmother for the first time in Korea.

I just wanted to tell you that I don't think the parents would buy a plane ticket all the way to Korea if they were having economic problems (a plane ticket from the USA to Korea is very expensive!).

Some of the Korean (Hangul) words are misspelled in the translation to English.
For example: "Hello" in Hangul is spelled like this in English: "Anyang-haseo" and "Grandmother" is spelled "Halmeoni".

I think that if you can ask somebody to help you edit your story, it will turn out very well!

Great job!