Soul of Light

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Soul of Light
An orphan is someone who was never wanted. Someone that has to pull through alone, without anyone's help. That's what I always thought. Then why do I feel as if all that was a lie? Is it because his eyes are so warm?

Note: This book hasn't been edited at all. I'll do it later. Try to enjoy it as it is. And ofc ourse it's not finished.

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  • Veröffentlichung: 07.03.2013
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red.rose.mikaela

The idea is good and original, I think, and I am glad to see that you followed my advice and corrected the bad grammar and every little error. You are a good writer and I want for you to be greater and develop your talent in any way as possible.
Can't wait to see what happens next, so please don't keep me waiting very long.

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