BookRix

This book is so good so far cant wait to read what happens next! :DDDP FFFFIIINNNIIISSSHHH IIITTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks alot that was helpful cause i didnt know i had erors in my story so thanks;) XOXOXOXO
Sophie

I really liked the book.I know you have heard it before but you have some errors (I make the same ones,too) but they can be fixed. I really would enjoy if you would finish the book. I have a feeling that it will be an amazing book.

Love,
Cheyenne

Thanks ;-) XOXO But I am still going to heve to have more commets to go on!!! Tell you friends to read and comment.
Thanks!!!
SophieXOXOXOXO

It's a great idea!Please finish the story. I suggest you edit it and expanded the story...More about their relationship, but otherwise great start!!;)
halima

You have a good workable idea
I found the read a little stilted and there were a few spelling errors nothing you cant fix
I think you should plod on do a re-write and expand your story. show more how you feel about Jay
as I said more work and you have the bones of a interesting tale of a young girls emotions and dreams

good luck

I think you should finish it it is pretty good.
Jade XOXOXO