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update plz

Are you gonna end it there? It's good, it's a slice. Wish there was more.

I can only read 4 pages but seems interesting.

Not bad honestly but seeing you write that story which just write the real you ( the nessa i know), lol makes it very interesting. Keep it up. The book is great for so far

i love this book omg!

update!

Plz update!!!

I read it. This could be a great story you just need to put in the work effort and love. :)

Hmmm, I agree with Judy about dividing the work into paragraphs. You need to develop the character of Antonio because:

1. Who bumps into a stranger and gets so comfortable with them? That's a classic horror movie or is it just me? Or maybe you did that on purpose?

2. He claims that Vanessa is different yet they only just met. *insert thoughtful emoji*

3. Give him a personality don't make him a Christian Grey wannabe.

:)

ayeee this is lit you already know im just waiting to see how you write me in dis book lmao. i love you bihhh and your writing is amazing you know i love reading your shit. update soons and stay lit! xP