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Are you gonna end it there? It's good, it's a slice. Wish there was more.
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XD ON THE WAY
I can only read 4 pages but seems interesting.
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Not bad honestly but seeing you write that story which just write the real you ( the nessa i know), lol makes it very interesting. Keep it up. The book is great for so far
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Thanks so much xD
update!
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Plus you have to factor in this is from my point of view so I don't even know if I'm getting him right
oh yes thats trueee
Lmao its kinda hard
I read it. This could be a great story you just need to put in the work effort and love. :)
Hmmm, I agree with Judy about dividing the work into paragraphs. You need to develop the character of Antonio because:
1. Who bumps into a stranger and gets so comfortable with them? That's a classic horror movie or is it just me? Or maybe you did that on purpose?
2. He claims that Vanessa is different yet they only just met. *insert... mehr anzeigen
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Oh yeah. I do have a concern, it all seems to be moving so fast. For sb who doesn't trust pple, she seems to be doing the opposite....maybe that's just me. :)
Then i did a great job somehow she feels safe with him
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ayeee this is lit you already know im just waiting to see how you write me in dis book lmao. i love you bihhh and your writing is amazing you know i love reading your shit. update soons and stay lit! xP
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Lmao kayy
update ;-;;;;
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