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Is there a second one of this? It's really a cliffhanger!

Keep working on it, and you'll have great story made of your handiwork! ^v^

Good luck!

its okay :)

great storie so far, sorry I have not had the time to read it earlier. I've been torn between school, writting, and hanging out with friends.

good so far

Thank you for the review niamh. Well it is true though if you didn't help me I may still be writing the second book and this book would have came out different. And how I started it the reason it is like that is because of how the past two book were... usually I would have don't what you said... but I continued like how Cera always started her story. I miss Cera already :')

i thought i was really sweet what you said at the start, sayin without me you couldnt have gotten this far, which is true!! XD im jokin, without u MFS would have never began. :)
I liked the way u started it off as a chase, that automatically made the reader read on, although at the start u explained why and how Cera died and that they were going after Dison. now naturally anyone who read the first 2 books would understand that, buts its always good to explain whats happening. however i think you shouldnt explain that at the very start.
maybe, while they are running from the humans, make Kiba say 'We are loosing his scent.' and then explain who they are going after and why and blah blah, just an idea but from personal experiance, havin the back story at the start isn't the way to go :)
anyways, possitive its a good start, and i loved the way ur usin more swear words and the way they 'fell' of the cliff :)
lemme know when you add more please :)

MAn you are the best at writing! I'm that as good as you! you need to teach me how you do it, over and over again! Oh my ghosh i am already locked in on this book!