BookRix

thank you for your star and of course i will write some more as soon as i get chapter 6 done :)

I loved it :) please write some more

A bit confussing to me at first, but interesting and promissing of great series of tales.

thank you for your stars both vampires18 and daltonio (cool name btw)

Daltonio aren't you a little too young to be reading the stuff i've written? it's kinda x-rated when it comes to swearing -i hope i don't influence you if you're readying this :)

Thanx for the advice
Shia

I like the attention-grabbing fight scene in the beginning. It's a good story but does need some editing. A good way to do this is to print your work and then go over it line by line. You find a lot of errors this way. I notice you call Brian "Brain" in the first few pages too. Keep up the good work, Scarlet is a no bullshit kind of gal and it shows.

thank you

wonderful storie

You should add vampire romance into the novel. It makes it strange and territorial.

thank you anyway for at least trying....not every book is for everyone so don't worry about it.
Shia