Scarlet's City

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User: ainshawal
Scarlet's City
Scarlet is a newly Mistress of the City. she doesn't want it but the death of her twin sister and the little visit she had from two of the Supremes, forced her into this mess. And since she hasn't fully announced it openly to the supernatural and non-supernatural world of the City, her title is up for grabs. Attempting to avoid getting killed, she soon finds out her sister had some dirty secrets hidden in her closet after her death and this would determine the allegiance between her and those who can control the elements itself -not to mention a hell of a lot more- the mages.


Dieses Buch ist Teil der Reihe "Scalet"
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Scarlet's City
[First six chapters]
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Stichwörter: 
scarlet, fantasy, S, Fiction
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ainshawal

thank you for your star and of course i will write some more as soon as i get chapter 6 done :)

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mcharlene

A bit confussing to me at first, but interesting and promissing of great series of tales.

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ainshawal

thank you for your stars both vampires18 and daltonio (cool name btw)

Daltonio aren't you a little too young to be reading the stuff i've written? it's kinda x-rated when it comes to swearing -i hope i don't influence you if you're readying this :)

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alicev

I like the attention-grabbing fight scene in the beginning. It's a good story but does need some editing. A good way to do this is to print your work and then go over it line by line. You find a lot of errors this way. I notice you call Brian "Brain" in the first few pages too. Keep up the good work, Scarlet is a no bullshit kind of gal and it shows.

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S.R.Morris

You should add vampire romance into the novel. It makes it strange and territorial.

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ainshawal

thank you anyway for at least trying....not every book is for everyone so don't worry about it.
Shia

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