Most enjoyable read. One thing I despise is being told too much about a character on the front side. I like to learn as I go. Nicely done and engaging, letting us learn more of 'Robin' as the book unfolds. I wanted more book when I ran out of words, and that is a sure sign that your doing something right. Yes, there needs to be some polishing, but for me story is key and content rules over polish. If you wish to publish, then... mehr anzeigen
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I agree,there needs to be some editing in terms of grammar and spelling.Love Robins' character.Please review one of my poetry books.It would be much appreciated.Thanks!
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Review - You have done a good job of describing and putting into words this character's sadness and grief. As the previous critique pointed out, there are some editing issues. I loved the fact you used the word 'hence' which one does not see as much, but I've always been fond of as a 'joiner word. I would question what Point of View you are working towards. You might want to research that. Otherwise, you have created some... mehr anzeigen
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After seeing a number of grammatical and spelling errors, I checked your profile to find, as I suspected, that English is probably not your first language. So I have to say in light of that, this is a wonderful effort! English is very difficult (heck, a lot of native English speakers can't get it right!), so I applaud you for how well you got the heart of your story across. I could feel Robin's conflicts, her pain and sorrow,... mehr anzeigen
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thank you soo mch fr ur encouragement..:)