BookRix

Great! Don't know whether to be shocked or laugh.

Sheila,
Excellent! Your story caught my attention beginning to end. I voted for you

Oh...I neglected to vote earlier! My vote. Again, excellent work!

Sheila,
This was a nicely-written short story. I voted for you.
Augustus.

Shame John had to die to mete it.
You have my vote.
Chris

Great twist!!! That was brilliant. Well written too.

Blessings,

-< -@ Meli

Greta twist in the story. you have my vote. Serena

Well done Shelia, that was not bad at all.

Yikes, that was heavy! But impressive as well. I love those twist endings. Well done!

For all the reasons stated, this is a fine piece of writing. I so agree..the ending was marvelous and ironic!