BookRix

sorry, don't plan on a sequel... unless anyone really wants me too, i could write something around that... write what comes after, maybe??? If anybody really wants me to, let me know!!!

This is another one I wished I'd read before the contest ended.

I liked the concept but you used superfluous words like 'suddenly.'

You could have wrote it something like this...

'He was not the man I thought he was. Silver gun, silver bullet, blood, darkness.'

Good idea though.
Wendyxx

Love, betrayal, shiny stuff - it's all there.

But, alas, no sequel I suppose.

Thanks guys... i wrote this for a contest. You were supposed to write a story in 15 words... this is what i came up with!!! So glad you like it!!!

Very good Shawnee, Vivid picture.

Carol x

Wow...that says so much..Easy to build a whole story around that.

uhh.... kinda left me at a blank.