BookRix

Stupid.. Writing is horrible!

i gottah finish it :-(

soon (:

when i write and i write a sentence i really like, i get side tracked and start writig a whole new story . but i promiseeeeeee, this ill be done beofore MAY. thanks again for your support .

when are you gonna finish??

plz finish

not sure im gonna read

it seems good so far but why is it so short

Gooduklady, thankyou for your feedback, however i disagree. i may have tons of spelling errors and structural erros and blah blah blah, but its my first draft my job was to keep people wanting more, and i think i've filled that postion perfectly. and as for my sexual scenes? humdrum? i think they're anything but! it got your pulse racing(:

thanks so much mitchell, and i do plan on doing more . (:

Unfortunately, this is not even erotica, in my opinion. I think it needs to have an "X" rating on it so that minors do not read it (even though YOU are a minor yourself). Content is not appropriate for youngsters.

Your writing? I shall be brutally frank. Poorly written. Tons of grammar, spelling and structural errors. Plot line flimsy. Sexual scenes - humdrum.

You obviously have a wish to write. Why not write something beautiful instead and then we will all come to call.