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Yeah, update Your typos make up for the shortness of the preview.
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You write with conviction so clean it up, its worth it. You have the knack of providing a good tale but it is spoiled by your usage and abuse of the language. With some editing you'll have winner after winner. I'm sure you can do it.
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what an asshole...but good,really loved it
u should write more
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