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really good

pretty good can you write some more xx

its not like its gonna get like published

There are several spelling mistakes in the beginning of your story. these are easy fixes./A program called "Word" from Microsoft will fix most of these errors. We all have similar problems when writing. I am sure when you read through your story you will find some. Hope this helps./joeparente