BookRix

Not bad. It's worth fixing it up and elaborating a bit. You can see it in your mind and even try to put it into words but you have to do it clean to win the respect you deserve. I hope you work on it and might even be convinced to help you if you ask. I don't bite. LOL Lots of others on this site will give you a hand, too. You'll see.

THIS BOOK IS GOOD BUT YOU NEED TO FIX THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS AND TOUCH IT UP ALITTLE

the book is good you should write more or make a 2 book

soooo cute

i like it so far please write more

you've got me on the edge of my seat.I really hope you continue because I can't wait to find out what happens next.