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I love everything about this Shane! :)

Best to you in the contest!

Robin

I really enjoyed your story; I especially liked the intrigue of a dark side you injected into it. I thought you handled the storyline with a watchful eye and just the right amount of implied evil! Kudos. Wa do, Elizabeth

Oh, I like this story! Magic, show business . . . mystical things. All my favorite things!

Oddly, never read more than a short story by Steve King, though I did read his book on writing. Hope my style isn't too close to his. Thanks for the read!

Hi Shane,

I have enjoyed reading your story. Nice stuff about the Hollywood sign at night. This story is so out of left field. I love the unpredictableness of it. Very 'Stephen King'. Is he your idol???

Couple of spelling errors, leaving of the 's' in one case on pg 11.

What a fantastic story. I loved it.

Bek :)

was magical, Shane! I loved the suspense and the "glitter" metaphor for the rising "stars". It was mysterious and mystical! Truly enjoyed!

Good luck, Shane! Petra :))

Spooky! I always stay away from fairies. Where exactly is this place? Brian

Thanks for the reads. Uh, what is a spag mistake?

A fey horror story..takes you along for the ride...enjoyed..Paula