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nicely written...only critique is the names of the characters should be capitalized. but otherwise, very good

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Oh Obama is a man of color and an American. His ancestors were also slaves in America. Some his His folks were also african slaves, that were captured from the mother land and brought over here. Oh indeed the story does coincide with our wonderful President Obama and ALLLLL PEOPLE OF COLOR!

Since Obama is not a descendant of slaves, but the son of a Kenyan man and a white American woman, there is no direct correlation between the slave story and Obama's historical victory.

THANK YOU!

...I usually only get chills when I'm touched by something of beauty. Or when it's cold outside, or when I have a cold. I would have to go with the "beauty" thing in this case :).

Well woven tale Shadelra

The Cornerstone- OK? difficult to read. Should have 'copy read' for errors before submitting

THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO ENJOYED MY TAKE ON THE BATTLE OF THE WORDS: OBAMA. I WISH EVERYBODY WHO WAS IN THE BATTLE THE BEST OF LUCK. FOR ME IT DOES'NT MATTER IF I WIN OR LOSE, IT IS THE FACT THAT PEOPLE EVEN IT WAS ONE ENJOYED MY STORY. I AM EXTREMELY HUMBLED WHEN I READ THE WORK OF OTHER WRITERS ON THIS SITE. IT GIVES ME MOTIVATION TO CARRY ON WITH MY DREAM TO ONE DAY GOD WILLING TO GET MY WORK PUBLISHED, NOT FOR THE MONEY BUT FOR THE SIMPLE FACT THAT ONE DAY MY DAUGHTER MAY GO TO THE LIBRARY AND SEE DADDY'S BOOK!

hi I thought I would comment on your book. It was an impressive read given you made it live by connecting the dots of heritage from beginning to end. Prophecy has played a big part in Obama living in the White House. I hope he will continue to fulfill what has been dreamed must be.