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While this is not my preferred genre, this is very well written. I really like it, and it's impossible to get me like much besides action or horror! lol

Your words so eloquently depict the scenes. Azura is portrayed with warmth and tenderness. Her longing to belong is felt and understood. I could imagine this as a longer story, detailing more of your heroine's experiences. Simply beautiful expressions, Serena. Also, I love the aquatic, blue cover.

I swam in the mood of this piece- very nice. Just right for my late afternoon interlude.

Sorry I haven't commented sooner. This is beautifully written with excellent phrasing and flow. I thoroughly enjoyed the images and feelings of these creations.

I think this is an extraordinary book...transported me somewhere else...kudos to the writer

These three distinct little stories link marvelously, telling a tale of loneliness, togetherness, and finally the gift. Was it placed there by the storm, or strung together by the two who needed no one else to complete themselves? Someone else?
Not really important. I think "he" made it; he wrote it, and he is near:) My gosh, I hear The Meditations of Thais in this beautiful piece! The peace and introspection...

Yes, very appropriate for a longer work. Very much so.
Your use of imagery is second-to-none.

:D its so beautiful. I really hope that you extend this into another short story. I'm interested in finding out what could happen next.

I loved this...my kind of story. I could feel Azura's child like wonderment.

Tantalizing tidbits of another life and larger story.

Well woven with streams of lovely word choices.

Great.