The Bus Ride

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UniquePoet60

Sereni, "The Bus Ride" , a poem about a very scary situation. I really enjoyed reading. Great work!

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sereni

Thanks Renee that means so much coming from you.

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yuukifantasizer

That was really good. Its rhyme wasn't obvious as an amateur's(aka mine)and it had a plot of sorts. It was interesting how luck played and how true I think that to be.

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sereni

You are so right in our cars we are insulated from the daily happenings. Thanks for reading it. Serena

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gurashlak

You enjoyed every moment in the bus.Anxiety kept you thinking what will happened next.Consider those who daily travel by bus to their destinations.How much life they enjoy ?Once in a blue moon ,we must travel in public transport ,to experience the things in reality.good work.

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sereni

Than you for reading and I am glad you enjoyed it.thanks Serena

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sereni

I think I was frightened a little thinking the way the world is today and all of the unbalanced people running around. Thanks Serena

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felixthecat

The way you tell stories with your verses is absolutely charming.
I wasn't frightened for you...I somehow knew you'd write an escape:)
Excellent little piece!

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sereni

Thank you I am delighted to be writing and enjoying all of your comments. Thanks again Serena

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