Very Good Poem, I enjoyed it.
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I enjoyed this poem very much, especially when it came to the end, when the children asked, "where is the rest?" I thought that was cute and funny. :)
It is quite a cheerful poem, in time for Christmas cheers. :)
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Sereni,
You have written a very nice, lively, true to life poem. I really like it. Excellent writing!
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the commercialism trap and in a beautiful bow you certainly did wrap.
Years ago when I first decried the making of Christmas into a credit card mess, one preacher was saying, 'As long as Jesus is still in there, then this madness is worth it."
But I too am afraid that with the political correctness, the celebration of Jesus is not even a tag line.
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Thanks for reading and saving my poem. I am afraid one day the true meaning of Christmas will be pushed aside and it will just be another day to shop.
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A lovely, light hearted poem.
Thank you,
Chris
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Thanks not everything is bad about the holidays.The family times are wonderful. Thanks Serena
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Ah so true, yet so sad. Right on Serena, beautifully and poignantly done! What a poet you are, like a shining star! Robynn
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I did say this year that it may be a little lean and out of the mouth of a 12yr. old came a reply that didn't matter he loved me.Serena
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