BookRix

You MUST finish this delightful short story, Sereni. You have me wondering about the impact of those windows and the ongoing dreams!

Two things. Your plot thus far, your characters, and your grammar concerning them are VERY nice. Take a bow:)

The other. You should get an award for your STUNNING covers.

Thanks renee for always reading, and saying such nice things .I have a new chapter and I hope to post it soon. Let me know if you have something you want me to read in return

Hi Sereni, I just had a chance to read your book Ninety-Seven Windows and it is a very good story. I will complete tomorrow and comment further. Great job! As always!

Forgive me for not replying to your post sooner. The part you are asking about is in the first story,( The Queen Mystique) Marty died after suffering from cancer.

I will be posting more as soon as bookrix comes back online. Thank you for reading my story, and all your kind words.

You're right you will be reading more about Ryan. I have had so many things come up,and havent posted anything but after bookrix comes back on line I will add more. I have to thank my husband for all of the editing, and thank you for your comments.

Your book is off to a great start. It caught and kept my attention and makes my curious to what happened to Marty and how she met Michael. I like your style. Your flow with words makes one want to read what you are writing. Let me know when you have the next chapter finished. Can't wait!

Your writing has captured the characters emotions and you left us (ahem... me!) curious with how you ended the first part. That Ryan looks like he's going to become more than a friend.
Now write more, I want to see what happens :). Oh and your flow and grammar are great.

I am so happy to read such a lovely comment.I was afraid my writing didn't have enough drama, and or action.

Thanks for your kind words I am working on the next chapter.

Your story is beautifully written and filled with life. It is believable and I am very impressed by your skills. I hope to read more soon.