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Interesting story
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sorry everybody been waiting to see what happens next. I have been super busy with life, but I intend on having this episode in the next complete of days

hmm, not bad. a few typos, but im intersested. also, MY TURN. Ill right one now. maybe ull like it.

hmm, not bad. a few typos, but im intersested. also, MY TURN. Ill right one now. maybe ull like it.

thanks I try to get chapter three up. I have been vey sick and I'm trying to get sick. Plus I don't remember where I put my flash drive and i'm not a loud to use my mother-in-laws computer vey often. I have to what for my mom to bring me my computer. I know but the typos i'll fix them when I have more time on my hands

Interesting story line; you have Batman as a bad guy, which is very different, and I'm really curious to see where you take this. You need to do a little polishing - lots of words got left out, like "not" to talk to strangers (I believe you wrote, "my mother said to talk to strangers", for example), but those are simple, editing issues which I'm sure you'll handle once you've got the whole story done. Sounds like you have a lot on your plate, between school, finals, and working on your stories. Good for you - I wish I had that much energy, lol! Well, keep it going; I'm intrigued and look forward to seeing what happens next!

Totally awesome I was a little confused with you repeating some of the actions but its really good oh also you have somemispelled words can't wait for more