wow what a prologue, so exciting and emotional. i love it cant wait for more !!!
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I hope I get to read more of this soon. :D
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There are moments when I was completely captivated by the scenes, Selish. You open well:) You write basically in-scene...showing, not telling.
The major plus in this introduction is you raised serious questions for the reader:) Now I must go to Hell and discover the answers.
Good job.
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Ok I haven't been able to read your first book yet but after reading this I can't wait to start. As soon as I am through reading the one I am on now I am going to make your's the next on my list. Great story. Want MORE MORE MORE!!! Plz let me know when you upload the other one because I will want to download it to my phone like I did your other book you helped me get to my phone.
Thanks alot
Angela
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I like this one so far, and it's only 10 pages long! I really think you should continue with this! And be sure to let me know when you have updated your books, alright?
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AH! Its so freaking wonderful that you tied in your other story with this one! I was so surprised when he began to talk about Araken. I was like, o.o, Seriously?! Thats such a twist! The prolouge of your story was really great. It was vivid, and very real feeling. I think you should definantly keep writing it. BUT, I would like to read about how this happened...as in how Araken did all this. So, that means that its kind of an... mehr anzeigen
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interesting storie i hope you write more
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So far it really good , I'd love to know what happens please write some more. ;)
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You are so awesome there are no words to describe it!!! I love Araken but I am indeed intrigued selish, as always! I can't wait to read more and see where you will lead this new (undoubtedly) handsome demon and WHOSE path he will cross along his way! :D Love it KEEP WRITING THIS!!!
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This is the first time I am reading a story like this. Thanks for the exposure to a different world.
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