BookRix

Chico, CA

Mr Brooks, I agree with you that Whitman feared and detested fuedalism in all
its forms. I am glad he is not alive today. We have a president who loves
dictators and admires authortarianism, an insanely wealthy less than 1%, and a
Republican party whose leadership has seen fit to turn it from a ""political
party"" to a rarefied group of valets for the corporation or industry that
owns them. And what about the serfs? We used to call them citizens. Now they
go by other names. They are ""voters"" in gerrymandered districts,
""consumers"" urged to buy to the point of indebtedness (see credit card and
student loan debt), ""laborers"" with the freedom to work constantly as many
jobs as they can and still not make a living wage (see minimum wage and cost
of living), ""investors"" without the money or skill to invest (see 401(k)s),
and ""retirees"" without the savings to retire (see no pensions and the urgent
need to kill or privatize social security). It sounds pretty feudal to me.

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I finally finished it! This fan-fic was intense and just, "on the edge of your seat," grade-A SEXY!! I loved it. It is some great writing. You really know how to capture the moment. xD I would really like to see a round 2. xD I bet Araken would too. But, is Chesh cool with this? I think that Chesh and Araken are way sexier though. The best sex scenes I ever read, were between them. Keep going strong buddy. You rock. :D :D :D And thank you Araken, you and Whiplasher were very entertaining!

:( Didn't get to finish it yet! BUT...OMG, O.O, it is a work of smexy art so far...such vivid scenes!! :D I am in male smexiness heaven! Very great stuff!

Damn! And I have to stop just when it was getting super sexy! I love it so far and its great to finally fill in the pieces from what I read before. You are so great!!

I really loved your fan-fic. There were some grammatical issues, but it was good. lol it was a big change seeing Araken act a little timid, and seeing him in the world of the humans. But over all you did great!!!!