BookRix

brillant story but iam read few pages its was nice

You make a valiant effort to render the story in an unfamiliar language. I think you have done well in that I was readily able to understand what you were saying. Of course there are many misuses of words and use of wrong ones altogether, but that will come as you continue to practice.

It's a great start, Julie. I think you have done well.

i liked your story please write somemore

AWWW WRITE MORE TELL ME WHEN YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!

I truly hope you continue to write this story. You have a lovely command of the English language, & have captivated me to read more.
Chris

I'm so glad you posted this in English! What a charmingly-written story! You've taken a rather tired theme and made it quite enjoyable by your character's amazing and engaging personality. The language issue isn't a big deal, and it says a lot about your ability as a writer that despite the minor grammar difficulties, it was impossible to put down. I read it through and was disappointed when it came to an end. You can have someone edit this for you, perhaps, in English to smooth out the rough spots, and you'll end up with a fantastic story! I'm so gad Chris introduced you and look forward to reading more! Welcome! 'D

einpaar schöne zeilen von dir, die auch einwenig zum nachdenken anregen... ich wünsch dir ein frohes fest...

Ich finde die Geschichte auch sehr schön.Sie lässt wirklich Adventsstimmung aufkommen.Das einzige,was mir aufstiess sind die spitzen Ohren des Engels.Man hat automatisch eine Fee vor Augen. Vielleicht war das auch von Dir beabsichtigt.Wer weiss schon genau,wie ein Engel aussieht...

Ganz bezaubernd! Eine kleine, feine weihnachtliche Geschichte, wie ich sie mag. Du überraschst mich immer wieder! :-)

Eine ganz zauberhafte, gefühlvolle kleine Geschichte :-). Wie schön, dass ich sie entdeckt habe, war jetzt genau das Richtige für mich. Sehr gerne gelesen!