BookRix

Hi, I'm sorry to bother.
I would like to invite you to write on the platform I work with.
If you are interested, you can reach me on insta: ods.apa or message me at leonandre880 (at) g m a i l (dot) com
Thanks.

Awesome story!

This story is good. But you should check the grammar :-)

YESH

You have a nice start of a good story going here, but it needs allot of double checking on the gammar. The plot has potential though so keep it up. Thx for sharing.

Ps. you spelled "found" wrong..

It's cute so far...yes, Cute. Not trying to be a bitch but there is so much you could have done better js.

i loved it i want more ;)

the story was wonderful i loved it it had some grammer problems but i didn't care about it i loooved the story it was so killer i could never put the book down !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

your grammar is very bad and i dont follow weel with it that way so please triple check before you upload anythinglese !!!