BookRix

So this is what I've written! copied from wattpad no less O.o... lol it has no italics and no proper spacing as of yet because when i pasted it it got rid of it and i need to upload the rest so yeah... but please comment any suggestions or opinions :) ty xx

Need more very good

I've edited most of the story now, I will most likely update tomorrow, and if not, then some time this week.

Try to write the words as words. I mean Cya write it as see you, works better for novels.

There are some words that need to be capitalized after a period. The story flows, but you seem to be rushing through it. At times it needs more details/description. You could do it as you edit it. Remember, take it slow, no one is running after you :). Also, watch out for verb tenses, at times you mix them.

I like the story. And try advertising it on the groups, it helps to get reads. There are werewolf groups where you can share it.

I've finished chapter six, enjoy. If you have any feedback it's appreciated.

Hey guys. So I'm up to chapter 5 and really need to know if you think it's a good book so far. It's the first book I've ever written, so if you have any pointers or notice any mistakes, please. Thank you.