believe me or not

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User: sawarni
believe me or not

a sweet love story about two people who are passionate about cricket. But they have a hard time believing in each other. Find out what happens. I hope you like the story. 


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love, cricket, school, friendship
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This is a nice, well written love story with a simple formula easy to translate into other languages. In correct English it is lacking in some cohesion due to cultural differences but not overly obstructive. My advice to this young author is to read a lot, study the details of other writers and keep writing. Practice will make you better and better. Good Luck.

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