Wichtiger Beitrag
This is a nice, well written love story with a simple formula easy to translate into other languages. In correct English it is lacking in some cohesion due to cultural differences but not overly obstructive. My advice to this young author is to read a lot, study the details of other writers and keep writing. Practice will make you better and better. Good Luck.
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