The Stairs Creak

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The Stairs Creak
Hannah and Michael were a happily married couple. The vacation should've gone better. Most vacations help one's marriage, not destroy them. The house itself was beautiful, but the monsters inside that tortured his wife were not. Her dreams that drove her insane. Her screams at midnight. Tossing and turning that kept him up all night long. He never believed in haunted houses before this day.

  • Fantasy
  • 2017 Wörter
  • Ab 12 Jahren
  • 400
  • 2
  • Veröffentlichung: 18.07.2014
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Fantasy, suspense, monsters, insanity
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James Gerard
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James Gerard

You have spelling, punctuation, and formatting errors in the story, but it is a very good story. The prologue sets up the mystery of the story very well and will lead me back to your story. Good job so far.

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HolyT.A.R.D.I.S.ofGallifrey
HolyT.A.R.D.I.S.ofGallifrey

Thanks!

James Gerard
James Gerard

Good additions to the continuing story.

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