zxsarah,
This short short 15 word story is very chilling, powerful, and a sad nightmare.
Excellent writing!
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Was a shocker. A little much, disturbng, but you definently got the emotion in those few words
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It made me feel nauseous. If 15 words can do that, then you've got my vote, girl.
And may i just say. You've presented it with a beginning, a middle and an end and there are no superfluous words in there.
that's what it's all about.
Way to go, Sara.
xx
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I've never really written anything before so I figured that this contest was a test for me. Thank you all for your support with my very first "book". It make me feel good and to try again at something else.
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I want to cry. You have encompassed a story of love, loss and grief in 15 short words.
Excellent.
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I'm not smiling because of the story. In 15 words it was powerful. A horrific nightmare we all have had.
I'm smiling because with this, your first, you have arrived.
Excellent!
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mothers...I hope this was not the case for you.
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who doesn't really write, that is one of the most voteworthy entries i've seen.
It's the title that makes it so chilling.
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Recalls Hemingway's own six-word short:
"For sale. Baby shoes. Never worn."
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