My Baby Girl

My 15 Word Story Von:
User: zxsarah
My Baby Girl
This book was the winner of the Short Short Story BookRix contest (15 words).

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15 words
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UniquePoet60

zxsarah,

This short short 15 word story is very chilling, powerful, and a sad nightmare.

Excellent writing!

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writerjordan

Was a shocker. A little much, disturbng, but you definently got the emotion in those few words

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writingmum

It made me feel nauseous. If 15 words can do that, then you've got my vote, girl.

And may i just say. You've presented it with a beginning, a middle and an end and there are no superfluous words in there.
that's what it's all about.

Way to go, Sara.
xx

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zxsarah

I've never really written anything before so I figured that this contest was a test for me. Thank you all for your support with my very first "book". It make me feel good and to try again at something else.

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staceydoss

I want to cry. You have encompassed a story of love, loss and grief in 15 short words.

Excellent.

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felixthecat

I'm not smiling because of the story. In 15 words it was powerful. A horrific nightmare we all have had.

I'm smiling because with this, your first, you have arrived.
Excellent!

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tophat

who doesn't really write, that is one of the most voteworthy entries i've seen.
It's the title that makes it so chilling.

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