I loved the story but found the lack of editing annoying. PLEASE edit your book and clean up the misspellings and grammar problems. It will make it so much better.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
I've been sick with mono....so i've been trying. -_-
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
dude! hhury up! U need to get to the part where she meets daniel.
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
You have written with feeling. It looks like you have also done some fine research. It is an interesting subject you have chosen and you write well. You need to do what we all do, get a good friend to proof read for you. You have a talent for story telling. Keep writing! Robynn
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
great book!!! and I think you GRAMMER is just fine!!! can't wait for updats!!!!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
Samantha, this story, inspite of all its grammatical and spelling errors, is truly great. I read every word.
You should really get someone to proofread it. I often do the same . No matter how careful I may be, someone will always find some mistakes.
Keep writing,
Laz
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
dude!!! you went crazy wrighting this!!!! haha you hade to look up evry little thing to make sure that the thing was used in world war 2!!!!!
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen
yes. the book is on going. i've been trying to update but i had no internet for afew months. ill update soon.=)
- Permalink
- Kommentieren
- Kommentare sind geschlossen