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I was totally drawn into your story and enjoyed every word. No complaints...it was great. My only suggestion would be the word "vociferously" which I don't think you used correctly. Apart from that,excellent job. I liked the cop and would like to read more stories about him.

Thank you for participating in our short story writing contest "Rain Stories".

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