thanks for all the comments!!!!!!!! :)
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this is an amazing book and ya like they said alot of emotions in those 100 words i luv it <3
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You speak of your determination to fight till your last drop of blood. How the fight will never end till all is right.Serena
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thankyou so much and yes you are right it's not my first language (because i'm from egypt)
i really appreciate !!
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I agree with Paula. There is a lot of emotion in those 100 words. Am I correct in assuming English is not your first language? Somehow I get the feeling that you have used an on-line translator for this. If you ever need help, do not hesitate to ask. I am sure many of us will assist you in putting your words into a more recognizable form. All the very best to you.
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but i hope you liked it!!!
i tried my best to make it 100 word for the contest!!
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English grammatical errors BUT the emotion you conveyed is gut wrenching...p
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