Love Me

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Love Me
Only a few days before, David was in Hawaii, not due back for another month; but this morning, he revealed that he returned early and therefore would be attending the study group, a big fat “SURPRISE!” attached securely to his statement. Of course, Kennedy wouldn’t have found this something to be nervous about before Saturday, but Saturday was five days before this day and two days before February 14th, and everyone knew that February 14th is trouble all around.

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I love your descriptive words in this story. You had me thinking that you were older than you really are by the vivid way you described the scenes in the story! You have some issue with switching back and forth from past to present tense... but other than that, good job!

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