This is different...unique...imaginative and definitely deserves a vote.
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One. This is so imaginative; how you used the die as a focal point of Lena's decision-making. Excellent!
Two. Your grammar is flawless, and oh how that makes a good story breathe life.
My congratulations, and of course my vote.
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I think you rolled a winner with this one. I think I will toss a vote in your direction as well, while I am here.
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She has problems, that need professional attention right away.
Yet, how could I not love this story of a woman on the edge.
Great job, came back to vote.
Glynis
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And probably not that unrealistic either. Well written.
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Thank you @lazarus67 and @sereni for your comments! I'll fix that misspelling :)
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Seems as though this poor lady has a touch of agoraphobia, and doesn't even let the die decide for her. She would have continued till she got that six again...lol.
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I think it would help to give us a little more information about Lena and the peculiar way she lived her life, by rolling the dice. What caused her to do this? Even though she made the rules, and knew what each number meant she made an excuse not to follow through. Why?
It was an interesting subject and the only thing I found was a misspelled word at the bottom of the page I think you meant: He was probably cuddly. Good writing.
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