Amsterdam, The Netherlands
Sorry to be blunt, but the only thing that unites America is bloodthirst.
Always has.
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Chris,Bryan,Akin,Jose
Hillary Clinton did not call voters ""backward
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I like this, I just wish it was longer.
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Excellent job, Sabrina! You had me on the edge of my seat. It really spooked me to think of being in that dangerous situation. I voted for you.
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To be only 12 years old you should be really proud of yourself. I do agree with Wendy, but if you keep writing I will surely keep reading and it was a really good story.
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To be only 12 years old you should be really proud of yourself. I do agree with Wendy, but if you keep writing I will surely keep reading and it was a really good story.
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it was really good:) good job writing it! i agree it would be a lot easier to read if it was in block form but i really liked it:) great job!
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This is such a great premise and it has a really neat twist.
I think you are a storyteller who wants to be a writer. And judging by this great little story you will be a fine writer one day.
You've got to work on your grammar, but it's the delivery that needs the most attention, so that you can put the story across to the reader, allowing them to feel as passionately about it as you do.
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